Wednesday, November 26, 2008
Assignment 7 : My kids room
-----My kids room is very messy. There are two windows so kids room is usually bright and sunny. The piano is under the windows. The bed is between a wall and the piano. There are two desks and two chairs in front of the bed. There are many books on the desks in the bookcases. There are two closets so use one as the bookcase. Also there is a hanger in front of the closet. So my kids room is very untidy.
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I love a bright home. My old house got a lot of sun but my new house is rather dark. It's too bad especially for my plants. ^^
Here are some corrections:
1. The first few sentences don't support the topic - messy.
2. Never start a sentence with SO..^^
Normally Kids room is messy. I think your kids are mischievous boys.
Kid’s rooms are generally messy. You are quite right in saying so. It is a endless work to clear your kid’s room. Maybe you are very difficult time now, but you become better as time goes by.
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